My
Hero
by Rachele Allen
My hero is my big brother Ross. He is very nice, he is tall
and he has brown eyes and brown hair.
He is my hero because he is my teacher. By being my teacher
he is my coach. Ross helped coach my basketball team, me and
my team learned lots of plays.
In soccer he helped me learn to use my feet.
That is why he is my HERO!!!
My hero
by Zack Jones
My dad is my hero because he plays with me and makes brownies
every Friday. They are relly good brownies. Last weekend he
took me frisbee golfing. Last year I wanted a X-box. I saved
half and my dad saved the other half. we went to cosco and I
got an X-box and two games. For Chrismas my dad got me three
more games. I love my dad and he loves me.
My Hero
by Bonnie Cooke
My hero is my grandma! My grandma picks me up from school and
asks me how my day was then she tells me how her day was. My
grandma spoils me rotten she gets me toys at the Dollar store.
She buys me pretzels at Pretzal Time.
My grandma makes m&m cookies. She makes fudge with and without
nuts. My grandma makes delicious French Toast.
My grandma makes me feel better when Im sad. She plays cards
with me. She also does jigsaw puzzles with me and they are hard!
I think when she is sad I make her feel better too. Thats what
I love about my grandma.
My Hero
by Zachary Barnhart
My hero is my mom she has brown hair. When wears glasses sometimes.
She is really tall I think.
Another reason I think my mom is my hero is because she takes
care of me. She takes care of me by playing board games with
me. And she puts me to sleep.
She is nice to me by playing with me and helping me with homework.
My mom is my hero in many ways.
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by Jesse Rovai
my Dad was my hero when he was alive. He was alwas there when
I need him. I stayed with my dad every Day except tuesday and
friday when I stayed at my Aunts House. we drove to see his
friends, rented videos and went on walks. he came to my meetings
at school.
He taught me about music. he like heavy metal music and classic
Rock like the Rolling stones. when we listend to the radio he
woud tell me who the song was by. He liked to lisen to music.
Last thanksgiving a sad thing happend. my Dad Died. I felt horrible.
I helped pick out the music for the funeral service. I loved
my Dad but now hes gone. He was my Hero. He always liked to
see me happy.
My Hero
by TeeAra Smith
My hero is Allen Iverson, Why, because I am a basketball player
and I look up to him for advice before I play a game.
He is one of the most valuable players in the NBA. He inspires
me to play more and dont give up on your dreams.
He has lots of things named after him. He may not be batman,
but he is a special hero.
MY HERO
by Jeremy Burt
My hero is my favorite actor, Bill Paxton, he plays in my favorite
movies, he has a good voice. In person he is probrably really
nice but in the move Aliens he lookes mean... until the aliens
start taking over and he starts acting like a chicken. And maybe
some day if I ever go to a place where famous people visit I
might be able to meet him.
My Big Brother
by Jesse Komara
My big brother is as old as 21 he looks like he is 7 feet tall
but he is only 6 foot 4.
He has short brown hair.
When I was three my brother saved my life I fell in a pool and
I almost drounded in the pool.
That is way my my big brother is my hero. the end.
My Hero
by Dwayne Cooper
My hero is my brother. My brother helps me when I am in trouble,
like when I get into a fight. My brother plays with me when
I am bored. He teaches me stuff, like how to be a better fighter.
He also helps me with stuff like cleaning my room. When I see
my brother I see a good brother.
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by Taqurri Sanderson
My hero is my baby brother Daniel because he always plays with
me and i get to teach him a lot of things. He loves to plays
hide-in-go-seek and he loves to play pick-uboo with me.
Hes
funny and very nice but sometimes hes very mean like hell want
to slap and hes very agressive. Theres a very good, nice side
of him and a very mean, bad side of him but I like the bad side
of him because when hes angry his face turns bright red.
He cares about me.
My Hero
by Cody Briggs
My uncle is my Hero his name is Sean Starr my uncle is nice,
helpful. I love my uncle so much I do not want to leave his
house. He taught me how to grapple arms. face crank, Boxing,
and kickboxing to He helps me with my home work. He also helpes
me with hard times and bostes up my happness level. That is
why I chose my uncle to wright about. He also taught me how
to ride a motorcycle. When my mom went out of town... and
my uncle let me stay with him. when I had a basketball game
we won zack Jones team and my uncle was cherring me on I made
8 ponts = 4 baketes 3 aisises we won 24 to 12 I hade more ponts
than the other team at one pont and my uncle was cherring me
on for a long time and that made me happy
My Hero - My Dad
by Billy Bean
My dad is my hero because he is always there for me. like wene
I get hurt or when my feelings.
but wene he is mad you might whant to stay away from him. wene
he is not mad he is so cool. He will play catch with me even
wene he has a head ach. My dad is my hero because he is a great
dad and a hero to me.
My Hero
by Taylor McMillin
My mom is my hero because she does a lot for me and my family.
She takes our neighbors to school almost every morning.
She goes shopping for food for us so we wont be hungry and she
makes the best dinner.
She takes us camping. We go wakeboarding, tubing, kneeboarding,
and swimming. She is the best hero.
my heros
by Chelsey Gratz
I don’t have a hero I have two. And they are the best
ones that can think of. My mom and dad.
My Mom
My Mom is the best Mom in the world. Because when I am sick
she takes care of me. And when i’m doing a play or cheerleading
she is my number one fan.
My dad
My dad is one of the best hero’s he takes my brother and
me to the park even sometimes we play soccer. If he was your
dad you consider him as your hero.
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My Hero
by Kieran Cook
My dad is my hero because he takes care of me, feeds me, and
wakes me up. He makes money for the whole family. Thats six
people!! Some times he has to go far away to work like Redway
or Iland mountain. My dad is fun to play with.
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by James Sanders
My hero is my dad because he is always on his jobs and golfing.
My dad is funny when he starts to sing. He is a good dad. My
dad won one hundred races. But when ever he falls off a horse
he gets back up. And when ever he comes out of the hospital
he has a broken collar bone and a broken thumb. He always gets
hurt. He did not knew who I was. Because the horse stepped on
his memory box.
My Hero
by Billy Earls
My Hero is my mom because she helps me when I am sick.
She buys food for us. She buys food for breakfast, lunck, And
dinner. And the best part is she lets friends spend the night.
And she lets us have digetal cable.
My Hero
by Samantha Beacham
My hero is my mom. she will alway taking me to school. She will
play and watch mioves too.
But my mom will make me read, she will make me clean my room,
and clean the house but we all do that.
Some times we all go to the mall and look aroud, but my mom
is the first one to go out.
My mom cleans fast, but sometimes she can be tired so it goes
slow. Then I get to help her.
My hero
by Kyle Surwillo
My mom is my hero because she is a good cook. She sometimes
makes us things that we want like Top ramen, Taco Bell and chili
cheese dogs. She is a good mom because she hugs us and loves
us.
My Hero
by Tatiana Siaz
My hero is mom. I’ll tell you why she is my hero. Because
if one of us get hurt, she’s there for us. and she taut
me how to cook. and she taught me how to ride a bike. Befor
when she helped me ride a bike she let go and I ran in to car.
We go places together like the mall and blockbuster.
My Hero
by Jacob Downing
My dad is my hero. He takes one me and Joel to school every
day. He take care of our family. He is the best dad. He take
us catfishing and camping. He cook good dinner. Helpes us with
our homework wen we need it and my spelling words he says I’m
going to do it and I do.
My Hero
by Derek Hanson
My mom taught me how to cook and she worked in five restaraht.
She is the best cook ever. My mom always keeps a promise. My
mom rocks at singing.
my hero
by Chrissy Walsh
My Best hero is my best friends because shes so nice and shes
my friend because she like me and I like her. Her name is Saeama.
me and Saama usto play together and spend the night at each
others house and stay up all night watching scary movies. I
know her because she was in my class and she was living on my
block.
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by Cody Chapman
my hero is my big brother jerit. He is my hero because he is
nise. he likes the sane things as I do. He plays with me to.
I like my brother hes my hero.
My Hero, R. L. Stine
by Sam Sprague
R. L. Stine is my favrit ather I have a lot of his book’s
he is grat at rigting horror stores and he has bene riting for
so long I can not count how meny I have so I gest rede the ones
I have not lost
he also has moveiys to I like to watch them nigt in ter tower
and dont go into the basment and say ches and die tiger in the
snow deep trabill depe trubl 2 the best babysiter nigt of the
living dumy don’t go to bed eat worms He has a lot. He
is my Hero.
my Hero
by Garret Harmon
bret Favre is the Quarterback for the green bay Packers. He
makes the most touch downs and He is good at throughing passes.
He throws 10 yard passes. the packers won the game against the
broncos.
The End
Editor’s Note:
For most of the authors in this collection of
original stories, real and imagined, the writing process consisted
of making some pre-writing notes, writing a first draft, conferencing
with one or more peers for feedback, rewriting, proofreading,
and finally handing in a final copy to the editor (their teacher
– yours truly). In the commercial publishing world only
perfect copy, free of any errors in the conventions of punctuation
and spelling, is ever published. Here, for instructional purposes,
any students’ errors not caught between first draft and
final copy have been left intact for them to take note of here
in print. While some corrections were made on the way to final
copy, many were also missed as you will see.
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