Story Structure II

Copyright © 2000 Robert C. Huber

 

Theme

Theme may be defined as what something is about--the social, moral, and political ideas that underlie the story. In dramatic art this theme or subject is camouflaged--concealed within the action of the story. When theme becomes overt it may dominate the art and the result can be more like documentary or at worst, propaganda. Serious plays and true comedy are about something that matters, but much of film and television is merely about what happens next. Theme arises from moral, social, and political values that are personal to the author. Most writers don't intentionally plant themes in their work. Since they are so deeply embedded in their personalities, themes just flow naturally into the script. This is why certain themes tend to reappear in many works by the same author. Like plot structure, themes are seldom singular. That is, there are several themes within all works although one may be dominant. In some cases, especially in classic plays, we might find a complex of interrelated themes woven together--a thematic matrix. Examples of themes from recent films and plays include the following:

I have used the word 'subject' above as a synonym for theme. Do not confuse subject in this sense with subject meaning the object of attention. This confusion may stem from photography where we call the subject what the camera is pointed at. In this sense the subject may be an empty room, but the theme may be loneliness. Notice how in this list that although the first two have the same subject, World War II, that they have nearly contradictory themes.

Theme is what gives dramatic art its weight, importance, and staying power. Without significant themes plays and films may seem slight, trivial, and forgettable.

 

Conflict

At the heart of every dramatic tale is conflict. Indeed, it is widely held that without conflict, there is no dramatic art. What, then, is conflict and what forms does it take in story structure? In my youth, when a fight started on the schoolyard, kids gathered around to watch. In today's world with even children having easy access to guns, we are more likely to want to run for cover when a fight starts. Yet, we are drawn to conflict. When we drive down the freeway and pass an accident, we involuntarily slow down to see the carnage resulting from car versus car conflict. Car chases and shootouts preempt regular programming. Shows like Jerry Springer have made a centerpiece of domestic conflict. We seem to have an innate curiosity about it. It may seem strange that, though people go to great lengths to avoid conflict in their own lives, they are drawn to it in entertainment. The answer lies in the nature of vicarious pleasure. To enjoy something vicariously means as an observer rather than as a participant. The primal power of dramatic art is that it allows us to participate vicariously in extreme situations and events that we would likely never encounter in real life, and would avoid if we did. It permits us to be emotional voyeurs--to take an emotional thrill-ride--one without consequences.

Not all conflict involves violence. The chart below shows several levels of conflict that commonly appear in plays, movies, and television. It is arranged in descending order, from the most overt to most subtle.

Fighting

Fighting of all kinds, whether hand to hand or with high tech weapons, is the easiest way to grab the attention of an audience. It is less risky to have actors fight on film than live, and exploding cars and other pyrotechnics are impractical on the stage. Therefore fighting is more common (some would say epidemic) in film and television, though playwrights have also used it through the centuries. Shakespeare, after all, began Romeo and Juliet with a street brawl and a stabbing. In any case, this kind of overt conflict almost magically galvanizes audience attention. But there is a fatigue factor--it cannot be sustained indefinitely. Even the most skillful action sequence must end before the audience becomes sated and its attention wanders.

Argument

Almost as powerful as fighting is the argument. It can range anywhere from a mild disagreement to an in-your-face shouting match. A good argument is essentially a fight with words. In fact, today we speak of verbal abuse as being on a par with physical abuse. It is hard to imagine any dramatic material that does not contain an argument of some kind. Since it involves language rather than hardware, it has the added advantage of developing character as well as introducing ideas and facts that further the plot. Good writers use an argument to get characters to reveal thoughts that they otherwise would conceal. An emotional argument gives an excuse for their characters to reveal inner states of mind without seeming artificial and "stagy."

Confrontation

Confrontation occurs when one character or group encounters an opposing one. The appearance of Indians silhouetted on the hills above the cavalry column, or the arrival of a man's ex-wife at a party with her new boyfriend is a form of conflict that requires neither physical nor verbal action. Tension is generated because the audience is unsure what will happen and empathasizes with the discomfort of the characters.

Tension/Suspense

Such confrontational conflict may even be indirect, as in the case of two characters who are in close proximity but are unaware of one another. The audience experiences tension or suspense as they anticipate a potential confrontation.

Moral/Intellectual

The most subtle and profound form is moral and intellectual conflict. It not only exists as a form of conflict on its own, but underlies all the more overt physical forms as well. For instance, we respond viscerally to the fighting between the Americans and Germans in Saving Private Ryan, but the moral struggle between the Nazis and Allies gives the conflict deeper meaning. On the other hand, there are writers who use their characters as little more than mouthpieces for their own ideas. At worst such plays can become more like debates or propaganda than drama. At best they can move society forward. Such plays have their origin in the late 1800s with the "thesis plays" of Emile Zola in which he argues for his humanist social agenda. Then came the "problem plays" of Henrik Ibsen such as An Enemy of the People in which environmental pollution is made an issue on stage for the first time. George Bernard Shaw's "plays of ideas" such as Mrs. Warren's Profession which argued for tolerance of prostitution also fall into this category. A more recent example from this period, although based on a novel, is the musical adaption of Les Misérables in which the injustice suffered by the underclasses is portrayed. Moral conflict may not always be a writer's safest choice. Some have suggested that the television sitcom, Ellen, suffered loss of viewers and cancellation when it subtly shifted its focus from light entertainment to moral issues and controversial ideas.

 

Dramatic Conventions

A convention is an accepted or usual way of doing things--the conventional way. Some dramatic conventions are based on necessity, and others on style. For instance, it was a convention of the nineteenth century theatre to illuminate the auditorium as well as the stage. This was a necessity since the gas lighting of the era was too dim to use as spotlights, thus the whole theatre had to be lit in order make enough light to see the stage clearly. On the other hand, a convention of Japan's Kabuki theatre allows stagehands dressed in black to appear on stage during a performance to assist actors with props and costumes. They are disregarded by the audience and considered to be "invisible." Since their function could be accomplished by less obvious means, it is clearly a convention of style rather than of necessity. Other common conventions of today's theatre are the dimming of lights to indicate the passage of time, and the aside: the practice of actors turning toward the audience to make comments while other actors on stage are oblivious to them. This last convention even appears in some films such as Matthew Broderick's mugging and comments to the camera in Ferris Bueller's Day Off.

 

Time Limitations

How long can a play be? The simple answer is: as long as it is physically possible for an audience to remain seated. The length of plays has varied widely over the centuries. In ancient Greece the audience would spend the better part of each day for several days watching tragedies. But today's audience has been conditioned to a shortened attention span by television's 30 to 60-minute time slots interrupted frequently by commercial breaks. The theatre also has a "short form" known as the one-act play, but several of these are usually performed together to make up a full evening's entertainment. Today producers are offering more and more 90-minute plays, such as comedian Steve Martin's successful Picasso at the Lapin Agile. Most plays or films today fall into the one-and-a-half to three hour range, but there are exceptions. There have been some notable play marathons in recent years. Nicholas Nickleby, based on the Charles Dickens novel, and The Kentucky Cycle each took about six hours to perform. Such marathons are usually offered either in two segments with a dinner break between, or on successive nights. A skillful filmmaker who can strongly engage the attention and emotions of an audience can also push the time limit envelope--not too many people walked out of Schindler's List because they found its three and a quarter hours excessively lengthy. As a general rule, the longest stage plays tend to be either classics or musicals. Classics, because they were written for an age when people were prepared to listen intently for long periods, and musicals because they augment dialogue with music, dance, and scenic spectacle for added interest.

Another facet of time limitation is the length of time that is depicted within the story. Again, the simple answer would seem to be that as much time can be portrayed as is necessary to tell the story. However, the answer has not always been that simple. In the seventeenth century, critics believed that one of their most important jobs was the establishment of rules for good playwriting. They looked for inspiration to great playwrights of the ancient past who, like Sophocles, often carried out their plots within one day. Playwrights struggled against the resulting "twenty-four hour rule" for centuries.

 

Space Limitations

Films are not limited by space the way a stage play is. The film director need only transport the camera to whatever location is required for each scene. To perform a similar function in the theatre, the entire stage space itself must be transformed. It is also true that no stage production, no matter how detailed the scenery, can ever do more than suggest reality when compared to a film shot on location. The degree of surface realism is one of the true distinctions between stage and film. On the other hand, one of the real pleasures of watching a big production musical like The Lion King, is to see how director Julie Taymor has brilliantly used imaginative staging and rather simple materials to suggest the scope and majesty of Africa and all its creatures despite the space limits of a stage. However, the economic constraints of today's theatre being what they are, there is pressure on playwrights to write plays that require only a single setting in order to save on production costs. Yet, most any play can be performed with a few simple pieces of furniture in front of black draperies--most films could not. This is possible because the content of plays is essentially verbal while that of films essentially visual. The modes of dramatic art reflect their heritage: theatre as a branch of literature, and film as an extension of photography.

It is tempting to add Text Limitations to our list. The convention of theatre is that only dialogue may be used. Narrative description is to be kept to a bare minimum. The screen is much more accomodating of narration to accompany its primarily pictorial content.


Reading Assignment

You should be reading Chapter 10 in your textbook to get more information about dramatic structure. After studying the chapter go to the online quiz at:

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Lecture Exercise

Which level of conflict in dramatic art works better on film than on stage? Why?

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