Excitement revision (UPDATE) 



Wow, my mentor Steve works really fast with these e-critiques. He said my bouncing ball was pretty good with the tweaks that I made, and he also commented on my excitement pose. He said that there was a bit of twinning going on with the pose. He told me to bring Stu's back foot down a bit. So I did that, and then made another revision in which I switched the angle a bit of the pose as well as switched the angle of the arms with his left hand now higher than the other, also attempting to make that higher hand flow more thru the line of action. Below is the original and another revision with the help of fellow AMer Jeff and Will. Thanks guys. As always, comments and critiques are appreciated.



 

Posted: Sun - October 9, 2005 at 05:44 PM          

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