First E-Critique Back, with Revisions (Updated) 



So I got my first E-critique back from Steve. What a nice guy. He's really enthusiastic about this whole thing. So I submitted my pose of Stu leaning on the box, and Steve gave me a few touch up ideas. He said it would be a stronger pose if I raised Stu's left shoulder up a bit- that it would give him more attitude. He also told me to make his right leg a bit more bent to lower his waist so it would make more of an s-curve. Lastly to raise his right hand on his hip a bit. *UPDATED* Now, I got some more feedback from some of my fellow classmates. They told me to try to adjust the lower parts of Stu's spine to make it even more of an S-curve, because they were perhaps too rigid before. I was also told to put Stu's front leg over screen left and further back, attempting to put his front foot closer to his back heel, thus creating no overlap. I even pushed his left shoulder (leaning on the box) a bit further up till the rig allowed it, while also moving that same arm foward a bit. Comments! Thanks in advance!

 

Posted: Sun - October 2, 2005 at 05:44 PM          

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