Quiz Keys

Quiz #1: Opinion Essay Analysis (1/7: .5 points)
Quiz #3 Fast Food Nation (2/20: .1 point)
Quiz # 2: Twilight Passage Analysis (2/2: 1 point)
Quiz #4 Fast Food Nation (?? : .5 point)

 

Quiz #1 Answer Key (Opinion Essay Analysis)

The Question

Read this New York Times Opinion piece, find its thesis, and evaluate that thesis using the three-part criteria explained in the St. Martin’s Guide.

The Text: "The God Gulf"
by Nicholas Kristof (New York Times 1/7/04)

Religion may preach peace and tolerance, yet it's hard to think of anything that - because of human malpractice - has been more linked to violence and malice around the world. And now as we enter a new campaign year, it's time to brace ourselves for a new round of religious warfare and hypocrisy at home.

America is riven today by a "God gulf" of distrust, dividing churchgoing Republicans from relatively secular Democrats. A new Great Awakening is sweeping the country, with Americans increasingly telling pollsters that they believe in prayer and miracles, while only 28 percent say they believe in evolution. All this is good news for Bush Republicans, who are in tune with heartland religious values, and bad news for Dean Democrats who don't know John from Job.

So expect Republicans to wage religious warfare by trotting out God as the new elephant in the race, and some Democrats to respond with hypocrisy, by affecting deep religious convictions. This campaign could end up as a tug of war over Jesus.

Over the holidays, Vice President Dick Cheney's Christmas card symbolized all that troubles me about the way politicians treat faith - not as a source for spiritual improvement, but as a pedestal to strut upon. Mr. Cheney's card is dominated by a quotation by Benjamin Franklin: "And if a sparrow cannot fall to the ground without His notice, is it probable that an empire can rise without His aid?" It's hard not to see that as a boast that the U.S. has become the global superpower because God is on our side. And "empire" suggests Iraq: is Mr. Cheney contending that in the dispute over the latest gulf war, God was pulling for the White House and fulminating at Democrats and others in Beelzebub's camp?

Moreover, Mr. Cheney's card wrenches Ben Franklin's quotation from its context and upends the humility that Franklin stood for. If you read the full speeches Franklin gave to the Constitutional Convention, including the one with the sparrow line, you see that Franklin is not bragging that God is behind him but rather the opposite - warning that the framers face so many difficulties they need all the help they can get, including prayer.

Meanwhile, Howard Dean is grasping for faith in a way that is just as tasteless as Mr. Cheney's Christmas card. Dr. Dean bragged to reporters that he knows much about the Bible - and proceeded to say that his favorite New Testament book is Job. Anyone who cites Job as a New Testament book should be scolded not just for religious phoniness but also for appalling ignorance of Western civilization - on a par with Mr. Bush's calling Greeks"Grecians."

After talking to Mr. Bush's longtime acquaintances, I'm convinced that his religious convictions are deeply felt and fairly typical in the U.S. Mr. Bush says the jury is still out on evolution, but he has also said that he doesn't take every word in the Bible as literally true. To me, nonetheless, it seems hypocritical of Mr. Bush to claim (as he did in the last campaign) that Jesus is his favorite philosopher and then to finance tax breaks for the rich by cutting services for the poor. If Dr. Dean should read up on Job, Mr. Bush should take a look at the Sermon on the Mount.

With Karl Rove's help, Mr. Bush has managed a careful balance, maintaining good ties with the Christian right without doing so publicly enough to terrify other voters. For example, Mr. Bush doesn't refer in his speeches to Jesus or Christ, but he sends reassuring messages to fellow evangelicals in code ("wonder-working power" in his State of the Union address last year alluded to a hymn).

Republicans are in trouble when the debate moves to the issues because their policies often favor a wealthy elite. But they have the advantage when voters choose based on values, for here Republicans are populists and Democrats more elitist.

As we move into the religious wars, I wish we could recall how Abe Lincoln achieved moral clarity without moral sanctimony. Though often criticized for not being religious enough, Lincoln managed both of the key kinds of morality in personal behavior, which conservatives care about, and in seeking social justice, which liberals focus on. To me, each seems incomplete without the other.

Or there's the real Ben Franklin - not the one counterfeited by Mr. Cheney - who warned each of the framers of the Constitution to "doubt a little of his own infallibility." That would be a useful text for Mr. Cheney's Christmas card next year.  

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A Sample Answer

At first glance, a reader might think Nicholas Kristoff's thesis in "The God Gulf" is that "America is riven today by a "God gulf" of distrust. But given his discussions of the positions and attitudes of Bush, Cheney, and Dean in the rest of the piece, Kristoff's main point is that because of this gulf in religious values "it's time to brace ourselves for a new round of religious warfare and hypocrisy at home." Kristoff presents this thesis in clear and precise language warning readers what they should expect in the coming political campaign. Because the campaign has not yet occurred, this thesis presents an arguable hypothesis about the future that requires reasoning and support to persuade the reader. On the third of the SMG criteria--appropriate qualification--Kristoff leaves much to be desired. The charged phrase "religious warfare" conjures up images of jihad that are designed to exaggerate the tensions between Americans and the behavior of American politicians. While the rest of the essay makes a compelling case that politicians will pander to religious differences between Americans, Kristoff never makes a convincing argument for his melodramatic and unqualified claim that Americans face pending religious "warfare."

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Analysis / Grading

To succeed on this quiz, you needed mastery of the three criteria of a thesis: an arguable assertion, clear and precise wording, and appropriate qualification. The quiz also required you to find the thesis, and then explain, specifically, how Krsitoff's thesis did or did not meet the criteria. This evaluation element of the question had several possibly correct answers. What mattered most was the quality of your analysis and explanation. (You could easily have argued, for example, that the problem with Kristoff's thesis was not a qualification problem but a lack of precision in his choice of the prhase "religious warfare").

Rubric Criteria: the student's answer...

  1. correctly identifies Kristoff's thesis
  2. demonstrates an understanding of three criteria
  3. explains how Kristoff does or does not meet the criteria
  4. has clear prose without grammar, punctuation, usage, or spelling errors

Grading

  • an A(.46 / .5) answer meets all four criteria
  • a B (.43 / .5) meets three of four criteria
  • a C (.35 / .5) meets two of four criteria
  • a D (.3 / .5) meets one of the four criteria
  • an F (.25 / 5 or lower) meets none of the criteria

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Quiz #2 Passage Analysis Twilight

Criteria:

  1. who is speaking
  2. what is the character talking about (topic)
  3. what motivates the character: what is her or his cultural, racial, or socio-economic context?
  4. what themes from the broader work does this character deal with
  5. how does this character dialogue with or connect to at least two other characters

Key Points in Answer

  • Elaine Brown was a former black panther party president
  • She does not reject violence per se, but she does criticize senseless, purposeless violence that does not achieve a particular political or social goal
  • She is in dialogue with pretty much every other Africian American character in the book: a writer could explore differences and similarities in Elaine and any other of these characters' views on violence.
  • Comparisons to white authority figures also could work: Chief Gates, etc.
  • And so could any number of other possibilities as long as the issues related to violence and resistance were addressed. This was the key idea in both the selected quote and in Brown's section as a whole.
  • Good answers needed to consider at least two perspectives in dialogue with Brown
  • Many writer's struggled to distinguish between topics (the riots, Rodney King beating, etc.) and themes (racism, violence and resistance, economic injustice, etc.).

 

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