Chapter 8:
The Marianas Trench: Naval Officer
 Western Pacific, 1959-62

We think of earth’s plates colliding along the edges of continents, as they do along the Pacific Coast of North and South America. But in fact, some edges may be far inland, as they are in the Himalayas. Or they may be far out to sea as they in the Pacific Ocean several thousand miles east of Hong Kong, where the Pacific plate dives under the Philippine plate. Parts of the Philippine plate have been forced to the surface to form a series of islands called the Northern Marianas--bitterly contested real estate during the second world war. As the Pacific Plate goes down, it carries the ocean floor deeper and deeper along a crescent-shaped arc. The northern horn of the arc points toward Mongolia and southern horn toward the Philippines. Guam sits about one-third of the way down, on the inside curve. Part of the arc is the Marianas Trench, the deepest place on the earth, almost 36,000 feet down. The pressure at that depth is 8 tons per square inch., compared to sea level where it is about 14.7 pounds. If you put Mt. Everest in the bottom of the trench and stood on top of it, you would still have about 7,000 feet of water over your head.

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I joined the Navy in 1959. It might have been luck, but it felt like destiny or at least like conspiracy. When I was about three, my mother dressed me in a sailor suit and took a picture that Joanne still keeps on display. Then when I was four, there was that ex-student of my mothers who came strolling down the driveway, resplendent in Navy dress whites. Later, one of my compelling memories is the first time I was out of sight of land, when we crossed Lake Michigan on a ferry with my mother. When I was 11 or 12, I devoured all three of Charles Nordhoff’s novels about the H.M.S. Bounty mutiny and went on through a reasonable number of  C..S. Forester’s Hornblower novels, of which an unreasonable number exist.

Of course I might have escaped the military altogether if I had been able to get a draft deferment. I did try that, though without much enthusiasm. First I interviewed with the CIA, who had approached the head of Chemistry asking about seniors whose grades and skills might be calling them to work at the margins of the field. I suspect my name occurred to him pretty quickly. I was intrigued by the requirement that recruits have “some knowledge of explosives and the ability to communicate with small groups.” Their interviewer gave me an application form as large as a small book, and I bogged down half-way through. Besides the sheer tedium of the forms, I didn’t like the idea of having a job so secret I could not share it with my wife, for I never doubted I would be married to someone as soon as I could support a family. I also interviewed with several defense-related companies, where a job would have gotten me deferred. but all of the more prestigious ones wisely turned me down, and I chose not to be one of the herd that signed on with Boeing. I think I secretly rejoiced in these failures because I wanted to join the Navy all along.

SIGNING UP--AND READING NIETZSCHE

When the Navy flew me to Seattle for the physical, I made a bee-line for the piers near the seedy YMCA where the Navy put me up. That was the first time I had seen the sea or, more important, smelled it or heard it—that tangy odor of dead shellfish and ropes soaked in brine, and the slap slap of the waves against the tar-coated pilings underneath the boardwalks—but it confirmed my sense that I had made the right decision.

Two other things happened on the trip that became part of my mind: I bought a book by Nietzsche and I wrote a poem. The Nietzsche was  paperback edition of  The Birth of Tragedy and the Genealogy of Morals. I picked it up purely on impulse, and I still have it, inscribed in the flyleaf, “Seattle, April 1959.” I must have heard that Nietzsche was a rebel and slightly disrespectable. Over the next 40 years or so I read the first thirty pages of The Birth of Tragedy a dozen times. I know because those pages have my underlining in several colors of ink. But sometime in 2004, I reread Thomas Mann’s Death in Venice, in which Nietzsche’s treatment of Apollonian/ Dionysian themes figures heavily, as does Plato’s theory of the soul in his Phaedrus. The next fall I presented an academic paper on that topic at a regional literary conference where I demonstrated to my own satisfaction that much of the scholarship on Mann’s story was mistaken.

But more importantly--and more coherently--I told a story of how I myself had lived for decades with an appalling simplified version the Apollo-Dionysius contrast. I knew or surmised that Apollo is the Greek god of (among other things) reason, Dionysius the god of wine and intoxication. I thought or assumed that Nietzsche was making an argument in support of the Dionysian intoxication as an antidote to a culture deep in the thrall of Apollonian reason. That fit nicely with my quest to liberate the world, beginning with myself. And so I had lived from my early 20’s into my late 30’s with an image of myself as a Dionysian rebel heroically struggling to liberate the world from the grip of reason I was not sure then—and I’m not sure now--just how this liberation was to proceed. On some level of my mind, I think it  had to do with  feats of drunkenness and promiscuity. Of course I was drunk far less than most of my friends and promiscuous only tentatively and only in oriental seaports and never after I married.  Luckily my small-town, religious, middle-class upbringing was enough to protect me from the worst ravages of my philosophy, which otherwise would surely have damaged my life far more than it did.

Working on an academic paper at the age of 66 and finally reading Nietzsche’s essay all the way through, I realized that my bad moral choices had been supported by bad reading, for in fact Nietzsche was interested in Apollo not as the god of reason but as the god of song and the plastic arts. Nietzsche’s point was not that culture needed more intoxication but that Socrates had,  with his emphasis on logic, upset the delicate balance between Apollo and Dionysius achieved by Aeschylus. So it turns out I cannot blame my mistakes on Nietzsche.

POETRY

Then, on my way back to the YMCA after dark, walking past an upscale department store, clutching my Nietzsche in its little paper bag, I was startled by a dark shape deep in the entryway. I slowed down long enough to see it was a derelict and that he was surrounded by handsomely dressed manikins, softly lit. The image stayed with me all the way back to the YMCA, where I wrote my first real poem. The text is mercifully long lost, but I remember one line: “huddled in a doorway away from the wind, against a background of fine-dressed manikins . . .” I think I remember the line because of the similar short “i” sounds in “wind” and “manikins.” Later I would learn, at considerable expense,  to call that assonance.

I had been moved by verse since I was 8 or 9 when my mother read to me from Robert Stevenson’s Child’s Garden of Verses (“Oh how I love to go up in a swing. up in the air so blue/ O think it the pleasantest thing/ that ever a child can do”)  and from  Eugene Field (“The gingham dog and the calico cat/ side by side on the table sat”) I liked the rhythm and rhyme, and I think that I could even  sense in the Stevenson poem how words could imitate the swoop and dip of a swing and so embody the thing they were talking about.

Though I have not found my voice in poetry yet,  I have never stopped trying or felt I could stop even if I wanted to. For most of my teaching career, I wrote a few lines at least once or twice a week and I still do when I’m not traveling. Sometimes I inventory the events of the day before and find a pregnant moment or image that seems accessible to the pressure of language. If those lines fall into a form, then the form opens a path down which I can continue for some lines more, though not often to the end. Sometimes I try pouring an emotion or observation into the form of a published poem from one of the several collections I always have lying about my work table. That seldom works, but it’s a good exercise, one I have often recommended to my students, who generally felt it was cramping their originality.

Sometimes I examine the Bible verses I have read for that’s day’s discipline and use that as an epigraph, summoning up some analogous situation from my life. If nothing at all occurs,  I open one of the books on my desk and point my pencil randomly at a word, write the letters of the word vertically down the page and use the letters as an acrostic. That is often the most successful, thus confirming my general suspicion that the less writers think about expressing themselves and the more they think about technical problems of form the better the results will be. Poetry is a formal art and most beginning writers would write better poems if they were assigned a problem every day from an impersonal source on the internet or took an assignment from a book like The Practice of Poetry, by Bhen and Twichell.  

But of course if there were such a site on the internet, no one would open it because the motive of for poetry is not solving technical problems but responding to a felt need for words to assume a shape related to one’s experience. Shape is the key word, implying a kind of physicality that is related theologically to the incarnation—the word made flesh. Because of their line length (their most characteristic feature), poems have a shape on the page, and even a careless oral reading of a poem will—I believe-- respond to the line breaks. Shape also manifests in the sounds of the words, particularly if they rhyme but even if they do not—and, of course in the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables. I have studied prosody (the technical side of poetry) pretty carefully—to the amazement of my students and even many colleagues who sometimes  seem irritated that such a thing as prosody even exists.

But most widely published poets have studied prosody at some point, as musicians have studied music theory,  even if the goal in both cases is to internalize it so well they no longer think about it. Form is crucial. Dwelling on “content” always demonstrates a lack of seriousness. It may have  something to do with the iambic beat of the human heart (ta, SHUSH, ta SHUSH)) and with the fact that sobbing and laughter generally fall into a rhythm. Even if the impetus for a poem is some  poignant moment, the poem that gets finished has to be carried forward on the back of form through much of the composition, and many published poems begin as self-imposed assignments in form. I know it may be the teacher in me talking, but I say that if a poem is any good, it will at some point have been seen as a set of technical problems to be solved.  

That is not to say that the form is the “point.”  The point for me  (and I would think for most who write) is a heightened state of concentration and attentiveness in which we are aware of more than we usually are. Usually when I write verse, I am aware of the same thing as I am in writing fiction—of having crossed a line or having entered a zone where the world suddenly opens out into a landscape more dense than the one I was in a moment before, one that recedes to an infinite distance and includes all the best moments of my past and the best of whatever future I might have. To see the each thing in the world as the potential subject for a poem seems to me a high and satisfying  calling, even if you cannot write those poems. You could say it is a glimpse of Eden from which we came or a glimpse of heaven to which it is said we are moving. Those who try to describe it without theological terms are, it  seems to me, being unnecessarily inefficient.

NEW OFFICER ON THE BLOCK

And so, in December of 1959, I appeared on the quarterdeck of the EDSON in my new uniform. I suppose I looked comic. People in uniform often do until they have spent some time those clothes and learned not be self-conscious about them. Before I was even assigned a job on the ship, a young officer explained how crucial it was to have an apartment in town and how he happened to have a line on one, needing only someone to share it and split the cost. I did not see how I could say no.

Since he had a car, I did not have much choice except to go with him to the officer’s club when the duty day ended at 3:30. There we sat on stools at a bar and drank until 6 or 7. Then, as I remember, we would drive out to the apartment which was on Ocean Boulevard just across the highway from the Pacific Ocean. He would go off courting or drinking, leaving me alone, half drunk and hungry. I would snack on cheese and peanut butter sandwiches and read until I sobered up enough to go to bed. He would come in around 2 or 3 in the morning, and the next day we would drive out to the ship and do it all again. At the end a month of that, I had such stomach cramps that my roommate had to take me to the hospital ship in the middle of the night. I was still there a few days later when my ship sailed out for the Western Pacific, so I had to make a complicated journey by air to catch it in Guam.

The day after I reported, The Captain explained how my science training fit well with the ship’s current need for a Damage Control Officer. I would have preferred something in Communications, but I understood he was not really offering me a choice. The Engineer Officer immediately started sending me out on errands to the shipyard--to talk to people I didn’t know about repairs I did not understand to machinery I had never seen. I was overwhelmed and wanted to flee, but I plunged blindly ahead.

When I was not running errands, I was sent down to trace the pipelines in the four major engine spaces—two each for the boilers that made steam at 1200 psi and 960 degrees Fahrenheit and sent to the other two spaces that contained steam turbines to turn the propellers and smaller turbines for the electric generators. There were miles of such pipes, all wrapped in asbestos--not then known to be deadly. Besides the steam pipes, there were pipes for the fuel oil, the lubricating oil, the auxiliary steam, the condensate return. Each was labeled with stenciled letters, but the lettering was already beginning to fade, even though the ship had only been built a few months before, in Bath Iron Works, near Portland, Maine.

As I traced the piping and began working with the machinery, I felt a connection with the repairs I used to do—even fairly complex ones—to the bicycles I rode around on the gravel streets of Ennis, Montana. Looking back, I can draw out a theological point: Machines can be a way to glimpse, if imperfectly, an unfallen world. Though they are designed by fallen human beings and though friction is a kind of original sin, nevertheless, machines do work as well as they are designed to work. When inept people complain about machines not liking them, they know they are making a joke. They know that when machines break, they break for good reason—because of poor design, or because they have been mistreated, or because they are worn out.

People, of course, are a different matter. People know their health will suffer if they get fat, but they get fat anyway. People know they will be miserable if they cheat on their spouses, but they cheat anyway. People know they will suffer if they procrastinate but they procrastinate anyway. They know it’s depressing to gripe about things you can’t change, but they do it anyway. I tried to work with this insight in a story called “Guardian of the Shrine.” It’s about a young Navy officer who loses the key to the main bearing housing. This is how I describe the gears:

The gears are in a case about the size of a small cottage. They take the power from the steam turbines, which have thousands of blades--each about as big as a rose petal and almost as delicate--and transfer it to the main shafts which are the size of trees. The shafts turn the big 7-foot propellers that drive a 2700 ton ship through the water at 27 knots.
    
The gears are amazing. Each one is machined from a single piece of high-carbon steel shaped like a dumb-bell with unequal ends. The gears are machined into each enlarged end. The smaller circumference at one end receives the speed from the turbine and passes it on to the larger circumference of the other end which turns at a slower speed and makes up the difference in power. It's magic the way it works, but it's physics too. If something is turning, then the bigger it is, the slower the outer edge has to move. At the equator you're traveling a thousand miles an hour, and at the north pole, you're standing still, but you're standing on the same planet. It's the same way with gears. On each gear, the circumference of the small end turns fast and the circumference of the big end turns slow. The speed has to go somewhere, so it goes into power. Speed to power, speed to power, all the way through the system. That’s the system I’ve lost to key to.

As it turns out, the key was stolen by a young seaman in the officer’s division, whose wife was divorcing him. Because they were in the Philippine Sea, the officer had had to refuse the seaman’s request to return to the states to recover his marriage. The officer finally deduced that the sailor could have stolen the key to sabotage the gears as an act of revenge. He races to the engine room and, sure enough, finds the sailor squatting beside the gear housing, staring through one of the inspection ports. But it turns out the sailor had borrowed the key just to look into the unfallen world of machines where things can be designed to work and actually do. When the officer questions him, the sailor says:

It's hard to explain, Sir. I guess I just wanted to look at something that runs the way it's supposed to run, something that isn't fucked up. I thought if I just looked at it long enough, I could believe in something and it would be all right. I can handle it if I can believe in something, believe that there’s something in the world that isn't fucked up.

When the officer asks if the sailor is going to be all right, the sailor says:

Sure, I've seen enough. I know it will be there. I can remember it now. Whenever I need it, I can just think of the gears in there, turning and turning, smooth and perfect, and the oil running down on each place they touch, just like it's supposed to. It will like I had x-ray eyes or something. I can just look into my mind’s eye and see them, right through the housing. I'll be fine.

SETTLING IN

When I got to Guam to catch my ship, I found I was witness for the first time to an historical event. At one of the piers, there was cigar shaped cylinder. When I asked around, I found it was a bathescape called the Trieste, which means sad in French, though I never discovered a connection. The Trieste had been towed to Guam to make a historic dive into the Marianas Trench. It did that on Jan. 20, 1960, only days after we had left Guam for the next port of call.  The two men on board the Trieste were a navy LT, Donald Walsh and Jacques Piccard the French explorer, whose father had invented the bathescape.

My official title was Damage Control Officer. That meant I was in charge of the auxiliary machinery on the ship—everything that was not directly related to the ship’s propulsion: the toilets, the showers, the drinking fountains, the refrigerators and freezers that stored the ship’s food, the steering engines, the lights, the heat, the internal communication systems, even the tiny little motors that circulated hot water through the pipes so when you turned the hot water spigot you immediately got hot water. The air conditioning was a special bugaboo. I learned to hate air conditioning and still will suffer for a long time rather than turn it on in my own house.

In wartime, I was supposed to control the damage sustained in battle. My station was a cramped office deep amidships. During battle drills, I wore ingeniously designed sound-powered headphones and stood in front of a magnificent set of wall charts which showed all the compartments of the ship in many perspectives. Each of the hundreds of compartments on board was numbered according to a code that told how far down it was from the top, how far port or starboard from the centerline, and how many feet it was from the bow. In drills, I would be handed slips of paper saying that a compartment with such and such a number was flooded or on fire or both. I was supposed to instantly identify the compartment, make decisions, and issue orders to crews posted deep in other parts of the ship.
     
An inclinometer on the wall told us how many degrees we were listing to the side. In case we were hit, I was to do elaborate calculations and enter the results on a graph. When one line on the graph crossed another, the case was hopeless and I was to call the bridge on my sound-powered phone and tell the captain we should abandon ship. Only the Damage Control Officer was authorized to advise the captain to abandon ship. I was 22 years old. Before I came on board, I had been an indifferent student of chemistry at a state university and the author of an insipid column in the college newspaper. I don't think I have ever felt more ridiculous than I did in my sound-powered phones, standing in front of those wall charts, being handed slips of paper with mock damage information made up by people from another ship who had come over on ropes and pulleys to design these drills for us. A slip of paper might say, "You have taken a shell below the water line in compartment 3-42-117. You are taking on water at 4700 gallons per minute. The water is causing a class C fire in the electrical equipment."
   
There wasn't much I could do but call my crew closest to the disaster and tell them to go have a look. I never had the slightest doubt that in an actual battle, the phones would not work, the crews would have all already been gassed, the leak would smash its way from one "watertight" compartment to another, I would never get the information I needed to make my neat calculations, I would never be able to tell the captain when to abandon ship and we would all die messy, terrible, uncalculated deaths, like rats in a hole.

Gradually and painfully, I worked out a set management tools, massively expanding the simple planning I did in college to get my homework done on time.  I began carrying a pocket notebook in which I wrote down every non-routine task I was assigned or could think of. In another part of the notebook, I wrote down every phone number I called, until at the end of three years I could pass on to my replacement an  invaluable list of numbers of shipyard liaison officers and other bureaucrats who were useful in getting machinery fixed.

Every morning after breakfast, I folded  a fresh sheet of paper into a size I could carry in my shirt pocket where the notebook was. On one part I wrote a list of things to tell my division at quarters, a brief assembly every ship has everyday at 0800. On another section,  I wrote a list of tasks I could reasonably accomplish that day, taken off the master list in my pocket notebook. During the day when I was not on watch, I would work my way from one end of the ship to the other through the spaces I was assigned, making myself accessible for  dozens of impromptu conferences a day. When I came to the mess hall admidships, I would take out my sheet of paper, flatten it out on the cooler that kept the ice cream, look over the lists of chosen tasks and choose one to work on. I have done some variation on that routine ever since, except when I travel. When, much later, I looked at the expensive pre-printed day planners, they seemed drab and restrictive beside the flexible and variegated systems I devise myself.

Sometimes, the tasks seemed too much. I remember one particularly grueling inspection where the captain wanted me to send enlisted men down to scrub the bilges by hand. The bilges are the v-shaped spaces at the bottom of the ship, covered by grids of decking that form the floor of the engine spaces. They fill with oily water that drips from the machines. You can pump them periodically, but they are never clean and dry and no reasonable inspection would have insisted they be so.  My chief petty officer thought the request was unreasonable. I agreed but said we had to do it anyway. When I pressed him, he walked out of my stateroom. Technically, I could have had him court martialed for insubordination, but that would have been a huge distraction and  might not have stuck anyway. I was in despair the whole afternoon, incredulous that the rest of the ship’s crew could be going calmly about their business when my mental life was in shreds. I don’t remember how it turned out. Probably there was some sort of compromise, but if we had failed the inspection, I think I would have remembered.

At times like that, I would fantasize walking off the ship, getting into my Volkswagon that was parked at the end of the pier, driving through the gate, on out through the city, into the desert in the general vicinity of Las Vegas where I would check into a cheap motel and call the naval authorities, who would take me away to be court martialed for being absent without leave. Perhaps I might be sent for a psychological evaluation. A psychiatrist might talk to me in a quiet room with a comfortable chair. The ultimate result would be disastrous, but at least for a little while I would no longer be responsible for things that were beyond my control. The fantasy never took over, obviously, but it grew strong enough that I still have some sympathy for people--like Macbeth--whose obsessions create scenarios so compelling that they suddenly find themselves living in them.  

Over time, it got a better. As crew members came and went, I became the old hand so that when something went wrong, I could sometimes remember how we fixed it before and actually make helpful suggestions.  There were moments of deep satisfaction, even triumph.  When  I was watching my crew repair machinery deep in the bowels of the ship,  late at night, helping them pour over intelligently written technical manuals,  helping them draw replacement parts out of the ingeniously organized storerooms, I felt drawn into a camaraderie with men that I am not sure I have ever felt since.

In another moment in Yokouska, Japan,  I was inside our main condenser—they are big as a large bathroom—looking for a bad tube so we could plug it and sail out the next morning. In there with me was little Japanese man who had  been chief engineer on a Japanese battle ship in WWII. At my request, the shipyard had sent him over to help. I suppose he was indirectly responsible for the deaths of hundreds of Americans, but that night we were only two men—one old, one young--trying to solve a technical problem and get a ship underway.  When we found the bad tube at about 3 a.m., we grinned and shook hands.  He stayed on board while we got up steam and waved to us from the pier as we pulled away, on time.  

BACK IN SCHOOL

After a couple of years, I was promoted to Engineer Officer with a Damage Control Officer working for me. My main job then became attending to the ship’s propulsion machinery. To prepare for that, they sent me to Engineering School in San Diego. That school lasted several months, perhaps even three.

I had gone earlier to ship-handling school there, and I loved both those assignments. The officers’ quarters were shabby old dorms sleeping two-to-a-room, but comfortable. The mess (dining room) and officers’ club (drinking room) were a short stroll away. There was a black and white TV in a mournful lounge, where I watched the Kennedy-Nixon debates in 1960 and came to the conclusion that the primary qualification for any candidate for anything was a sense of humor. I may have still voted for Nixon out of habit, but my conversion to the Democratic party had begun and got another boost at Kennedy’s inaugural. It was not the famous line about asking not what your country can do for you that got me, it was another passage where he talks about the “long twilight struggle knowing neither victory nor defeat.” That was a struggle I knew pretty well and any president who could work it into his inaugural was going to get my heart and eventually my vote.  

We started classes at 8:30 and were done by 3:30. The work was not hard (I don’t remember doing homework), and there was plenty of free time. Many weekends I drove by myself north to Ocean or Mission Beach with a blanket and book and spent the afternoon sunning, reading, and body-surfing. I thought I might meet girls there, but I never did. Instead I met them through a singles club for women who wanted to meet Navy Officers. They called themselves The Bacherlorettes. I dated one girl—heavily freckled across the shoulders I remember—who cooked me dinner and introduced me to Liebfraumilch. She later tried to contact me through a friend, and I suddenly realized she would have married me if I had asked her. In those days at least, many girls would get married if you asked them. I sent her a lei from Hawaii, but I was not interested in falling in love, let alone settling down. I had a girl half-waiting for me in Montana and whether that worked out or not, I was interested in seeing the world and to do that, I had to travel light.

In San Diego, I found a kindred soul attending another school in San Diego at the same time.  We struck up a friendship based on a love for reading and the ability to find pleasure in something besides drinking in the officers’ club. The difference was, that he really could read. His name was Jack Kuntz. He had studied to be a Jesuit, even taken the vows. Then, at the last minute, he felt called back into the world and had been released from his vows (by the Pope, I remember, and was quite impressed) to join the navy and attend Officer Training School. He knew languages, including Greek, and he seemed to have read everything. Except for my mother, he was the first well-read person I had met who was not an atheist or skeptic. Books seemed for him to actually have some connection to life. He read the Bible, which was for me a dark and preposterous book. He knew by heart passages of Tennessee Williams. He talked as if it really mattered what Tennessee Williams had imagined someone saying in Night of the Iguana. For me this was something new.

It turned out that Jack was the communications officer on the PICKERING, a ship in our squadron, and so we were able to keep up the friendship after our schools ended. We went to movies, explored some non-digital dating services ("three phone numbers for ten dollars") and found them nearly as dismal as the most people find the current versions. Jack and I even traveled together to San Francisco to visit his aunt and uncle, who was a physician. Everyone who came to San Francisco in the 1960's fell in love with it--its water, its bridges, the peculiar style of neo-Victorian architecture adapted to the hilly terrain. Whole hillsides, covered with houses pained in pastel colors, glow at sunset, their windows flashing golden light. The doctor's clinical schedule as demanding, but the household rhythm seemed to flow in and around his work with no sense of panic or even improvisation. I don't know that I had ever stayed in a home quite so gracious--not luxurious, but gracious, with a sense of ease and courtesy that had something--but not everything--to do with money. I didn't know people could live like that, and i took it as an ideal that I was only able to approach after I married Joanne. Jack's relatives found us blind dates and we saw Bob Newhart, long before he was famous, at the Purple Onion, long before it was famous.

Jack and I had a lot to talk about. I had read my way through War and Peace and had taken a correspondence course in writing from the University of Chicago: the feedback was not encouraging.  I had written  poetry, all of it bad.  In a photograph of my stateroom I can see that I wedged books into the vertical girders on the bulkhead by my bed tightly enough so they would not fall out when the ship rolled and pitched at sea. One of those books was always T.S. Eliot’s Collected Poetry, that my future wife had given me as a graduation present from college. I had glued a scrap of the brown and cream gift-wrap into the back cover and it is still there. I was drawn to bleakly modernist novels, like Aldous Huxley’s Chrome Yellow, and I remember reading Oedipus at Colonus beside the pool at the officer’s club, looking over the edges of my book at the young families splashing in the water.

In one of my books, I had across a quote from W.H. Auden that has never left me: “We are all trying to spell God with the wrong alphabet blocks.” I can remember sitting in the wardroom eating dinner after I read those words, my head spinning with the thought (which I wrote down) that there were people--like Auden, like Eliot--smart people, who at some point in their life wanted to believe in God but could not,  whose lack of faith did not feel to them a triumph but rather a great sadness. I vaguely realized how inefficient and wasteful all my agnostic struggling was, how much easier it would be to fall into faith and pull round my shoulders like an old shawl language and concepts that had been worked out for 5,000 years or so. I was like a person in the wilderness, living on grubs and berries when just a few yards away was a tidy house with the table set and a fire in the fireplace,  that I would not enter because the house would not be my own, and originality was more important than truth.
 
Jack and I stayed up late on many nights talking about books and ideas and life. He told me about Juliana of Norwich, the 14th century mystic and the first women to write English which has survived. She was called naive and worse for declaring that "All will be well, and all will be well, and all manner of things will be well." Of course I was skeptical. "Come on," I said, "the century she wrote those words, the plague killed a third of the people in Europe. Where does she get off?" But Jack just laughed. "If she could believe it then," he said. "All the more reason for us to believe it now."

GOD STILL  DOES NOT EXIST

Jack's faith seemed to run at a depth that made my sophomoric meanderings seem flimsy and jury-rigged, but I could not imagine giving them up. I even have a journal entry, written in the back-slanted hand I used in those days, entitled “Why I Do Not Believe in God.” I list six reasons. Two of them are different ways of saying Christianity can’t be true because there are other religions that serve other people very well. This objection shows up on every apologist’s list of Standard Objections and gets a Standard Answer. But I can seldom remember the Standard Answer and have to fall back on the first answer I can remember, which was C.S. Lewis’, who pointed out that scripture says Jesus came to save everyone, but that He has many ways of doing that, many of which we cannot know about it. Lewis said that wherever a Buddhist prays with particular ardor, we can be assured that Jesus responds to that prayer.

In another Lewis passage I remember well, from one of the late books in the Narnia series, Aslan talks about one of the followers of the demonic deity Tash, one who had behaved with uncommon decency toward Aslan’s followers. Aslan’s answer is that whenever someone who professes loyalty to Tash demonstrates that loyalty with uncommon valor, then the valor accrues to Aslan. Likewise, whenever someone who professes loyalty to Aslan does so in careless and indifferent ways, the carelessness and indifference accrues to Tash.

Three of the statements have to do with science, for example that “every answer religion provides can be provided by another means.” I do list an exception: “the concept of religious experience.” The sixth is “unanswered prayer.” The whole thing is awkwardly phrased and there are a couple of spelling errors. Not exactly the titanic atheism of a Bertrand Russell. In fact, pathetic.

The issue, however, seems to have been explanatory power, as if God and science were competing in a quiz show. I do not list any particular questions, nor can I recall any. If the question had been, “why is there order in the universe,” then, yes, Darwinian naturalism does offer an explanation, though some evolutionary biologists believe in God. If the question had been “What is the purpose of life? ,” the implicit answer, I suppose, would be “To experience as much pleasure as possible,” an answer I would not have accepted on the grounds that none the people we honor  seem to have lived by that code.

Fundamentally, I was assuming that both systems had equal explanatory power, and that I was choosing science as more compatible with the modern world as it revealed itself in the most easily accessible sources—in the newspapers and in the gossip of my friends. I thought I had arrived at The Truth, but in fact, I was making an “arbitrary” choice, or, to put it another way, a basic assumption. Mrs. McCollom’s geometry class had it right—you cannot prove anything unless you assume something.

Both geometry and belief involve  leaps that must always feel both arbitrary and inevitable at the same time. When it comes to basic world views, you can stand on one side of the chasm or you can stand on the other, but you cannot straddle the fence forever, or—when you think about it--even for an instant. You can analyze religion in terms of science, or you can analyze science in terms of religion, but you cannot analyze them both from some third point of view. How we choose might involve mystery, or destiny or luck, but still feels like a choice.

STANDING WATCH

The other thing I did on a ship, besides attend to my machines, was stand watch. All the officers were expected to qualify as Officer of the Deck, in port and at sea. In port was easy enough. All we had to do was stay on board that particular day and tend to any administrative matters that came up after the rest of the crew had gone ashore. The OOD had to be sure that the boatswain sounded the various hours, from reveille (“Now up all hands. Sweep down all decks ladders and passageways. The smoking lamp is lit in all berthing spaces. Reveille, reveille”) through to taps (“Taps, taps. All hands keep silence about the decks. Sweep down all decks, ladders and passageways. Empty all trash receptacles over the fantail. The smoking lamp is extinguished in all berthing spaces. Taps. Taps.”). The OOD had to received a report every night from the various departments (gunnery, operations, engineering, supply) which by tradition were called “eight o’clock reports” even though they were  delivered at 20 hundred hours according to the 24 hour clock that governed everything else we did.

There were pieces of military nonsense one could stumble over, of course. One Sunday afternoon when we were anchored, the captain, whose name was Collins, came aboard from one of his regular drinking bouts and demanded that the OOD be sent to his cabin at once. When I showed up he slurred his way through a long discourse on how I had disgraced the ship by allowing some breach of protocol on the bridge. I was to stand out there until I saw what it was and correct it. I stood out there for a sorry two hours inspecting every hawser and line until he finally roused himself and told me that the ensign (a blue flag with white stars that flies from the short staff at the prow when the ship is anchored) was upside down—that is, with the two bottom points of each five-pointed star pointing up rather than down. I probably would never have made a career in the Navy anyway, but whenever I considered it, I remembered those two hours of unnecessary humiliation and the man who could not say simply “Slanger, the ensign is upside down. Have someone fix it.”

I have not entirely forgiven him yet, though my heart softened a little when I saw him expertly maneuvering the ship at night in shallow waters off the coat of Formosa, when we were dropping off some Navy frogmen during an exercise. Using only a radar screen with a seaman beside him relaying depth soundings from our SONAR crew, he took us within a few yards of shore, often with less than a dozen feet of water under the keel. It irritated me that a man who was a drunk and bully could also be vastly competent in one narrow but crucial area. I thought morality and competence should be better connected, but I had to conclude that gifts are dispersed mysteriously, if not quite randomly. Still, C.S. Lewis says somewhere that virtue, even attempted virtue clarifies and vice induces confusion, Captain Collins would have been even more competent if had been kinder.

Standing watch at sea was a different affair. That was called driving the ship. There were always two officers on watch, a Senior Watch Officer (SWO) and the Junior Watch Officer (JWO). One or the other had the “con”—authority to actually give orders to the helmsman. There you felt at the heart of things, helping the ship do what it was designed to do, part of a tradition that went back into prehistory.

Operating independently on the high seas in calm weather was exhilarating. There was a walkway around the bridge, exposed to the sea, where you could stand and watch the horizon cut across the rising or setting sun like a razor. The ship purred through the water in a dead calm or rose and fell in gentle swales. Porpoises would sometimes swim alongside us, leaping out of the water in graceful arcs. They would do this 20 minutes or more, long enough for the boatswain to announce over the loudspeaker (called the 1MC) “porpoises off the port bow.” Then work would stop so sailors could come topside to stand by the rail, watching, and no one would talk. When I was not on watch, I would go (at night, when no one saw) and lie down in the bow, which was so sharply undercut  that if you lay down and pushed your head a little out under the railing, you felt you were flying above the twin white waves made by the bow as it cut through the water.

Or I would sit on one of the hawsers on the fantail and watch the wake churned up by the huge twin screws. Anyone who has done that has thought how easy it would be to lower oneself into that wake and let go. They would not miss you until 8:00 the next morning, too late to think about going back to even look. It’s a wonder more people don’t do it. In my bad moments, I certainly thought about it. I even have a melodramatic note in my files dated Jan. 11, 1962. Written in that same back-slanted hand, it says:

As I stand here at the rail, about to kill myself, I find myself unable to decide which of two reasons stands uppermost or if indeed they are one and the same. Because I feel myself unworthy to continue living or because I cannot stand my environment. Yes, they are the same, for my environment is myself and I cannot tolerate it because of my unworthiness and my failure.

DARKNESS--AND A WAY OUT

Unworthiness. Later, working on Theodore Roethke, I found a better name for it: contamination. For Roethke, and for most people, this meant a sense of being contaminated, unclean, fallen. That would be bad enough, like the Li’l Abner cartoon character Joe Btfsplk. who perpetually walked around under his personal raincloud. But what I felt was something more serious: the sense of being a contaminant, of being a stain, a blot on the world, as if my own fallenness were dragging the world down with me, as if I were spreading unhappiness and revulsion wherever I went, as if the world would be cleansed if did not have to put up with me, as if I owed the world my death as recompense for having put up with me all these years.

It seems useless to speculate about where such feelings come from. We are told that feelings of self-worth generally are the result of loving parents. But surely not always. My relationship with my father was far from perfect, as these pages have made clear, but his difficulties hardly seem enough to account for my own. There is always the plea of chemical imbalance, but that is a medical will ‘o the wisp or perhaps even an invention of the drug industry. To the extent it exists, it is probably a symptom, not a cause. I suspect that serotonin uptake may well prove to be the same thing, though I am grateful for the relief the Zoloft brought to people I love.

In any case, the search for causes of unhappiness in family relationships is not always productive. I wonder if it is ever is. We do not need to know the source of mental pain in order to treat it. Though Freud is a great writer, classical Freudian analysis has been a blind alley, has it not? There are many ways into mental pain and many ways out, but my own experience suggests that meaning—significance revealed in verbal constructs—can be a way out, even when it has not been a way in, or when the way in is obscure.

Tom Cruise, the movie actor, is currently in the news for having criticized one of his fellow actors for taking anti-depressants, implying that she would have been better off with his own source of mental health, Scientology. Scientology is probably as bogus as a thing with a name can be, but even Tom Cruise can be right if he means that attitudes can influence mental health. And if you start asking where attitudes come from, it is very slippery slope to ideas, spiritual outlooks, worldviews, and even religious convictions.

My own release from episodes of mental torment was coincident with my conversion because it allowed me to think of mental suffering as sin. I know that labeling mental suffering as sin must seem like a monstrous strategy to those for whom sin is already a bizarre category. It has at times seemed so to me. But sin was the first word that had ever made sense of my mental pain. It was the first word that ever authenticated what I felt, that had ever put it in a larger pattern and provided a way out. That is, when I was in an episode, a voice inside my head was crying out, “You are a no good son of a bitch.” All that secular therapies offered me was another voice, equally shrill, saying, “No, you are a fine fellow.” The best I could do, then, was listen in my head to child’s silly argument: ‘You’re bad.” “No you’re not.” “Yes, you are,” “No, you’re not.” Forever.

The concept of sin cut through that by suddenly interjecting another voice, that said “Well, of course you are a no-good-son-of-a bitch. Everyone is. Did you think the book of Genesis was just a child’s story?” Later I figured out that even on days when we didn’t feel like no-good-sons-a-bitches, we still were, just by virtue of our membership in a human race that has been tormenting each other in every corner of the planet since we began making stone tools. The point is that we are something besides a no-good-sons-a-bitches. In fact, we are not essentially no-good, we are essentially made in the image of God. We are messed up in ways that are not altogether our fault but in ways for which we must take responsibility, and the way we do that is first of all by confessing our sin, not denying it, and then by accepting the love of the deity that made us in the image of Himself. That does not end our sin, but it puts us back on our feet. It does not make us a victor, but it puts us back in the fight, back into that long twilight struggle that Kennedy had spoken about.

SHIPBOARD ROUTINE

Even storms were more exiting than frightening. The bow would nose into the green water below the foam of each wave, and the water would come flooding over the deck six or eight inches deep and moving fast enough to wash you overboard if you didn’t cling fast to the railing. Sometimes the waves would be high enough so green water would crash over the bridge against the thick glass that protected the wheelhouse. If you stepped out on the wing to check a bearing on a compass, your face would be covered by sea water, whose the peculiar smell and taste you can never forget. That smell haunts me yet. When we were in San Diego in the summer of 2004 for the reunion of the Edson crew, I wept when our plane turned inland and I could no longer see the ocean.

Our destroyer--larger by a third than the WWII models we operated with—weighed 2700 tons and was 418  feet long. It could take a mile to stop and half a mile to turn, so every move had to be anticipated well ahead of time.  When we were operating by ourselves on the open sea, this was no problem, but often we operated in formation with several other destroyers, sometimes in a protective circle around an aircraft carrier. In those cases, turns had be coordinated by radio or semaphore or signal light. At sea, there are no roads and no landmarks; the view is the same in every direction. Imagine driving your car across a flat surface with no roads and no identifying landmarks, using only a compass, with a half dozen other cars crossing your path at speeds and courses you do not know.

There was an ingenious device called a maneuvering board to help out—a plexiglass circle about eight inches in diameter that could be rotated inside a larger piece of plastic. Like the periodic chart from my chemistry days, it was iconic—compact, dense and powerful. You marked on it with grease pencil, using parallel rulers and a dividers to indicate the course and speed of two ships, one of them your own. It mechanically did problems in vector analysis, but you did not have to understand the principle to get it to work. If a ship was approaching, you could find out how close you would come to it and take evasive action if necessary. Or if you were in formation with other ships and whole formation turned, you used it to find out the course and speed you needed to get to the same position relative to the other ships.

Behind the pilot house was a radar room where people did the problem on their board while we worked it out on ours, and we didn’t make a turn until we agreed. If someone got it wrong, ships could collide and people could be killed. It happened once when a sister ship, the PICKERING, failed to make a turn and the carrier sliced into her, canting her front one-third off at a 30 degree angle. No one died in that case, and we towed her into the Philippines for repair. By the time I got out of the Navy, I found I was visualizing a maneuvering board in my head as I was passing cars on the highway in my 1960 Volkswagon. I assume the thing is done digitally now.

But even with a maneuvering board, operating with other ships was a bewildering and chaotic situation, especially at night, when the other ships were a myriad of red and green lights—green if you could see their starboard side, red if you could see their port side. Your sense of how things were developing was fragile, like a bubble. If it all dissolved into chaos, you were said to have “lost the bubble.” I was always on the verge of losing the bubble and it showed. The captain could see I was not a natural at this work and kindly arranged to send me to ship handling school in San Diego. That helped, but I never felt comfortable when things got hairy, and someone more experienced always took the con.

In October of 1962, not long before I was scheduled to be discharged, the EDSON was sent to San Francisco on a good will mission. Tony Bennett had just released "I Left my Heart in San Francisco" and it played over and over in the officers' club where we drank one night away. Then suddenly we were ordered to take on a full load of food and fuel and get underway for the Panama Canal. We did that, working all the second night. I am not sure if at that point we even knew why, only that something serious was afoot. But we still had one night before he left, so our resident officer with a knack for these things managed to get us a bevy of stewardesses to invite us to their apartment in Redmund. Nothing untoward  happened--just a quiet evening of dancing to vinyl records and laughing in the unspoken acknowledgment that we were young, that we would probably never see each other again and that we might all be killed. The next morning, I was down in the engine room at my appointed post when we sailed under The Golden Gate Bridge, but I am told those girls were standing on the bridge, waving underwear at our ship as it sailed out. I am forever grateful for that gesture.

NAVY: SUMMING UP

The EDSON was decommissioned in 1988 and wound up as part of the Intrepid Air and Space Museum in New York City, along with a an air craft carrier, The USS INTREPID, and a submarine, the USS GROWLER. I visited her in 2003 when I was in New York City with Joanne and with our son Brian, his girlfriend, and Marc. On a cold April morning, Brian and I walked from our hotel on The Avenue of the Americas west to pier 84 on the East River. Brian put a mic on me and followed me through the ship with a video camera shooting footage that he then edited into a video, a nice piece of work as usual. It was surreal, seeing the ship through a lens of 41 years. It had become an icon in my mind, something artificial, a link I had forged in the chain of my life, When the gray iron reality of the ship ran up against my memory, I felt like it was the reality that had to give way.  

Sometimes it did: when I visited with the caretakers about what I remembered, I could establish that the structure really had changed—for example, that the open bridge had been removed so all the piloting was later done from behind glass. Or what had been the machine shop had been converted into a small museum that openly proclaimed what had been only a whispered secret in my time—that “Red Mike” Edson, the Marine Colonel for whom the ship was named, a hero at the battle of Guadalcanal, died by his own hand in the garage next to his home in Washingnton, D.C., in 1955, at the age of 58.

Within the last few years, the EDSON was removed from the Intrepid Museum and put in mothballs in Philadelphia. Both Sheboygan, WI, and Saginaw, MI, would like to buy the EDSON and open her up as a floating museum. Both are trying to raise millions of dollars and work through the monumental paperwork that would require. One group has prepared a 1615 page proposal that is being reviewed. If either group succeeds, and if I live long enough,  I will find a way to see her again, especially if she winds up on Saginaw, where I can ask around to see if anyone there  remembers anything about their native son, Theodore Roethke, the mad poet who would later lead me down paths that were more literary but no more productive than the EDSON.

My three years aboard the EDSON affected me as much as any three years in my life. Friends who served with me on the ship find it hard to understand how I can say that. For them, their military service is like a forgotten dream. But for me, it is constantly present. With just the slightest effort I can recall the feel of the ladder going down into the engine spaces, the recessed handles on the closets and drawers in my stateroom, the heat that rose up from the boiler room into my mattress, the shriek of the telephone beside my bed, the curved couch in the wardroom where the single officers would watch Soupy Sales on television, the polished  handles on the levers that closed the watertight doors, the wide-legged stance I used to walk down the passageways when the seas were rough, the light brown haze that came from the stack when the boilers were working properly, and the sick feeling in my stomach when I saw the smoke turn black or white.  

Incredibly, I can say that the Navy made more difference in my life than did my eight years of college. If I had somehow not gone to college, I would probably have become more or less the kind of person I am now: bookish, reserved, tongue-tied in small groups, accommodating, curious: on a good day, Scrooge’s clerk, Bob Cratchit, and on a bad day, Prufrock: “deferential, glad to be of use . . . full of high sentence and bit obtuse.”
 
When I got out of the Navy, I had a set of management skills I would use forever and I had whatever confidence I was going to have, which is not much but a lot more than I otherwise  would have had.  When I was tapped twice--out of the blue--to chair academic departments, I knew I could do that work. Probably the deans who tapped me knew it too.  I had traveled to exotic places, I had navigated the Navy bureaucracy alone, all the way from Long Beach to Guam. Though I felt like a boy—hardly less so at the end than the beginning—I had been treated like a man, given more responsibility than I ever thought I could handle. I had bent from the pressure--sometimes double--but I had not broken.

When Joanne and I  attended the EDSON reunion in San Diego in 2004, I wept when I saw Jesus Trevino’s name on the list of those attending. When I knew him, he was a Boiler Tender Second Class. Like me, he was a little bewildered by the complexities of our steam system, high-tech for its time. But he was always present, always willing to learn, always ready to do the best he could. When we saw each other at the reunion,  we embraced. He made chief and went on to a long career with five tours to Viet Nam. We still correspond. He says he is going to drive to North Dakota to see me, and I hope he does.